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Heretic
Jul 1, 2008 10:25:45 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Jul 1, 2008 10:25:45 GMT -5
Y'okay--
This is gonna get hella-sloppy, but it's a temporary fix: The next chunk ran right into "R" territory (a certain twosome ended up feeling friskier than I'd anticipated, but it's all pretty sweet and tender and it seems to work, so that's okay), so I'm sticking it and the lumps to follow over on the Adult board. Then, one happy day, ALL the chunks 'n' lumps will appear under an umbrella "R" over in the Archive. Alles klar...?
So-- the one or two or none of y'all who are reading this beast must now detour to the NAUGHTY BOARD. Password: 18. Have fun, yeah? (And apologies for the mess....)
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Heretic
Jul 5, 2008 10:15:40 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Jul 5, 2008 10:15:40 GMT -5
Part five is up (more for the sake of consistency than for reasons of content) over on the restricted board. It's awaiting approval (and the resolution of software disagreements) in the Fan Fiction Archive, too. Go on: check it out. G'wan, now. I know that the squee in this story has been at near-diabetes-inducing levels, but I swear-- as gum is my witness-- that in this chunk something happens. Finally. And it's something bad, too. Go on. Scoot, already....
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Post by slantedsunlight on Jul 6, 2008 7:09:09 GMT -5
I am loving this story SO. MUCH. I really needed something new from the Sunshine fandom to naw on, and finding you've been working on a new story was like discovering a little treasure. As always, spectacular work!
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Heretic
Jul 7, 2008 20:02:04 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Jul 7, 2008 20:02:04 GMT -5
Thank you, slantedsunlight! I'm hammering out chapter six now-- I've got the structure mapped out; now it's a question of details. Kind of an emotional see-saw this time 'round, from very raw and poignant to insidious and dark. And Mace and Whitby turn up again, bringing light and chaos in their wake. Something like that.... Anyway-- thanks for reading!
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Heretic
Jul 12, 2008 1:45:00 GMT -5
Post by nimue on Jul 12, 2008 1:45:00 GMT -5
The way you write Capsie still astounds me. You go, Kali!
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Heretic
Jul 14, 2008 15:19:07 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Jul 14, 2008 15:19:07 GMT -5
Thanks, nimue. Nice to see you around! I like writing Cassie and Capa: there's something very elemental about them, very straightforward and pure. They're very open with each other. Very sexy, too. (Hey, I think they are...!) Not that they'll be up to too much mischief in the thunderous, endless, tragic mess that is... ... [glow=red,2,300]CHAPTER SIX.[/glow] In case you've been noticing the board listing a bit, that's why. This sucker is HUGE. Hike on over to the Adult board. Read and enjoy. Bring adequate food and water. And, please, heed the lifting warnings. Thank you.
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Seren
Trainee
Rage, rage against the dying of the light
Posts: 9
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Heretic
Jul 18, 2008 8:03:56 GMT -5
Post by Seren on Jul 18, 2008 8:03:56 GMT -5
Ach, I've missed this! I was taken away from the internet due to the fun of real life but dear lord, I do love your writing style so much!
Shall comment properly later ^_^
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Heretic
Jul 21, 2008 13:28:24 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Jul 21, 2008 13:28:24 GMT -5
Hey, Seren-- and ditzy537, and any of the rest of the one or two or three of you who are keeping up with this critter-- thank you. No new chapter for another few days, I'm afraid, as I've convinced myself of three things: 1. There's no deadline here, and, pulp-writing fantasies aside (I'm increasingly convinced I would have been happy as a clam in the 1930s, knocking out junk stories for a penny a word), I'm not getting paid to write this, so, really, what's the stampede?; 2. the next bit requires thought (or "thought," or THOUGHT), which comes less than naturally for my reptilian HIT IT! SHOOT IT! KILL IT! brain, so I need to tread carefully, and 3. aside from my mittfull of loyal followers ( ), no one is reading this thing anyway. (Which begs the question: What the hell is going on with "Penumbra"? The hits are through the bleepingheimer roof on that one! What gives...?) Anyway-- the nonaction, nonthrills, and nonexcitement will continue apace by week's end, there will NOT be punch and pie until the wrap party, and a FABULOUS SOUNDTRACK is in the works. It won't be nearly as good as the soundtrack to THE * FILM * OF * THE * SUMMER 1, but it's got some dandy tracks. Watch for your chance to receive one free of charge. Yay, etc.! Tunes! Weird, depressing, offbeat, obscure... TUNES! (By the by, "Heretic" is now up over at Fanfiction.net, along with all my other daft ramblings. I'm "Punctuator" over there. Might make for a little tidier reading-- and don't forget to re-sort for "all ratings." Thanks.) 1. Mamma Mia, of course. Robert Downey, Jr., might be jim-dandy as the world's most fabulous hood ornament in Iron Man, and WALL-E might give Mr. Downey, Jr., a run for his money as the most convincing impersonation of Charlie Chaplin ever to grace the silver screen, but in the end THE. MERYL. ROCKS.
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TheLovecraftFactor
Communicator
"A Reality is just what we tell each other it is..."
Posts: 79
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Heretic
Jul 21, 2008 23:38:18 GMT -5
Post by TheLovecraftFactor on Jul 21, 2008 23:38:18 GMT -5
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Heretic
Jul 30, 2008 18:35:21 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Jul 30, 2008 18:35:21 GMT -5
Thank you, Lovecraftfactor-- Gotta get to work, but I just posted chapter 7 and I'm all happy and wound up, 'cause it's big enough to blot out the sun (heck, I'm that close to changing the name of the story to "Eclipse"), so let me ramble out a couple of excuses for being so darn late responding: 1. WRITING. And writing. And WORK. And WRITING. 2. CAR CRASHES. Or one car crash. The Niece and I got T-boned in her Lumina on my birthday. (Now, THAT'S something that doesn't happen every year.) We're extraordinarily sturdy folk (think "mountain troll" crossed with "sherpa"), and we're pretty much okay. But the Lumina is toast. As is-- heh heh heh-- the Toyota Legacy (or is that "Toyota HISTORY") that hit us. ***** Anyway, though, chapter 7 is sprawled out all over the Adult board. Honestly, this part has its own zip code. But I think this might turn out to be my favorite fic. Long, rambling, self-indulgent, sure: but I'm getting to say a whole lot of things I've been wanting to say. And it feels nice to visit with these people; it really, really does.... Thanks again for reading. Hope you enjoy the rest of this thing!
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Post by ditzy537 on Aug 2, 2008 0:13:47 GMT -5
I am loving this story. Ly for ya. Thanks! I can hardly wait to see what happens next........
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Heretic
Aug 5, 2008 22:54:02 GMT -5
Post by voiceofreason on Aug 5, 2008 22:54:02 GMT -5
I knew it.....I started reading and couldn't stop. I'm all caught up and left hanging. I curse your enchanted words. Waiting is not my specialty, but for the brief visits to your world, I will make do.
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Heretic
Aug 6, 2008 17:13:32 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Aug 6, 2008 17:13:32 GMT -5
Thank you. ***** In the next chapter, we are heading into the SLAM-BANG FINALE. A blundering ballet of decisions, some bad and some VERY BAD. No bullets. One blade. A biiiiiiig lake. And a blizzard. A recipe that makes for a big ol' pot of OUCH. But first I gotta go figure out how to un-curse enchanted words-- (Here's what I get for not reading Harry Potter. I oughtta know this stuff. Razza-frazza-bleepingschnitzer-drat word curses....) Hold on: I'll be right back. Witchipedia, here I come...!
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Heretic
Aug 12, 2008 19:30:29 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Aug 12, 2008 19:30:29 GMT -5
Chapter 8 is up over on the Adult board. "Heretic" is all done, folks. It's finished. Soundtrack to follow. ***** Thanks for tagging along.
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Heretic
Aug 15, 2008 10:12:29 GMT -5
Post by kaliszewski on Aug 15, 2008 10:12:29 GMT -5
TRIPLE POST. WHOOT!!! Soundtrack time:Submarine, "Evergreen" Monster Movie, "Winter is Coming" Ladytron, "Versus" The Walkabouts, "Unwind" Miracle Fortress, "Five Roses" Black Mountain, "Set Us Free" Now It's Overhead, "Let the Sirens Rest" The High Violets, "X-Tasy" Fjord Rowboat, "Simply Stood" Couse and the Impossible, "As the Colours" M83, "In the Cold I'm Standing" The Silent League, "Breathe" Assemblage 23, "Complacent" The December Sound, "Kill Me (Before I Kill You)" Now It's Overhead, "Let Up" Husker Du, "No Promise Have I Made" Black Rebel Motorcycle Club, "All You Do Is Talk" M83, "Farewell/Goodbye" King Swamp, "Kiss the Sun" Cloud Cult, "Love You All" ***** For your very own two-disc set of FABULOUS TUNES (or, barring that, a two-disc set of the tunes listed above), send me a PM. No kidding. The motley pile of notes above-noted CAN BE YOURS. FOR FREE. Yep. [Mostly because I'm too cheap to spring for punch and pie for the wrap party. And punch and pie are too hard to get into a bubble mailer. ])
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